Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Objective: Crops



Please tell me your opinions.... Thanks!

5 comments:

  1. ohh fancy Krista..of course haha. well as for crops I think they look good. the V is maybe too far down but i think that is the only one that is confusing. As a poster, I like your idea but maybe put add a color to create more hierarchy because I almost get lost. Ok well see you in history!

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  2. Nice.. that looks very cool:) I agree that the v might be cropped a bit much, the m may be borderline too. I think you could crop a little bit tighter on some of them. Maybe if you filled some of the letters in solid black, it would help create some contrast and hierarchy. I think it's a neat concept though-good job!

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  3. Now I can call you the over achiever! Haha, kidding. I really like this layout... a lot. It is organized and anyone who looks at it would be able to understand your concept. I think it would look interesting and maybe add to the composition if you added a little bit more color (one ore two more colors) to the whole thing. This way the eye would have a reason to look all over the whole poster. Good job, dude.

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  4. i like this and can tell what the letters are for the most part without looking at the little keys around them. When i saw this layout in class i liked it and how you made a pattern with the group of these. Good job honey!

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  5. keep your letter solid. most the crops are ok. make sure you choose the most interesting letters to crop and crop in as close as you can and let us the audience/viewer still be able to figure out the letter. -- andrea

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